Editorial
Inside The Monument: How to detect
bias
By Elizabeth Prata
I got a phone message from a person who was upset
with The Monument's article last week, "Council
calls for Library Expansion." The caller said
that The Monument was biased and that we slanted the
story.
I'm glad they called. I much prefer open discussion
between two reasonable people rather than a person
stewing without giving us an opportunity to have a
dialog and either resolve the issue or offer us chance
to improve. I also appreciate that though the caller
was livid, the call remained respectful in tone and
word.
Meanwhile, I thought this was a good opportunity to
present information to readers as to what bias is.
How to detect bias in news reports
There are two kinds of actions that contribute to
bias, one is bias in the way the news is gathered
and the other is bias in the way the news is presented.
As the LA Times states in their code of ethics, "A
fair-minded reader of Times news coverage should not
be able to discern the private opinions of those who
contributed to that coverage, or to infer that the
newspaper is promoting any agenda." If you can,
there's bias.
Gathering the news
Attend the meeting- The first rule of
thumb for reporters to maintain objectivity is to
actually attend the meeting. It sounds like a given,
but writers associated with the Gray News often do
not attend the meeting on which they report. In that
case, news that is gathered is either conjecture,
which results in a 100% biased piece, or gathered
from the newsmakers, who present the meeting's contents
from one point of view, again a total loss of objectivity.
Articles like that are also the worst kind of lie
to readers, who rightly assume that the reporter was
actually there.
Here's an example from this past October from The
Gray News:
"The Council has told Town department heads to
present two budgets: one with no increase over last
year, except for actual energy costs; and one "bare-bones"
budget, defined as the minimum budget necessary to
provide the Town with services."
The Council did not want two budgets prepared. Second,
the Council did not tell the Town Departments anything,
doing so would violate the Charter. They had instructed
the Manager.
Chair Gary Foster said in an interview with The Monument,
"The October 21 [Gray News] article is absolutely
not true. Council did not, does not, and cannot instruct
the Department heads. We instruct the Town Manager,
and he alone deals directly with Department heads.
Furthermore we did not instruct anyone to prepare
a flat budget and bare bones budget. Our instructions
to the Town Manager were to have his Department heads
develop a zero based budget."
The information in the Gray News's reporting was obtained
second hand, and it illustrates what happens-- they
end up presenting inaccurate and biased information
as news. The chance of getting the facts right are
much greater when the reporter goes to the meeting.
Refrain from associations- A second
rule of thumb in maintaining objectivity is to refrain
from associations. Receiving remuneration from, or
serving on committees, leads to a loss of objectivity.
The LA Times again: "Outside affiliations and
community work: Editorial employees may not use their
positions at the paper to promote personal agendas
or causes. Nor should they allow their outside activities
to undermine the impartiality of Times coverage, in
fact or appearance."
Here is another example from the Gray News: A few
months ago at a meeting, the Council discussed the
Fire Department Celebration. Nathan was on hand to
report but is also a member of the Fire Department.
As the Council's discussion progressed, he became
more and more agitated. As a Fire Department member,
he had a stake in the how the discussion turned out,
and his agitation betrayed his emotional involvement.
When the meeting ended, Nathan approached Vice-Chair
Upham, and asked him directly, "Are you opposed
to the Celebration?" Mr. Upham said, "No
I am not." Nathan's headline the next day was
"Upham opposes Celebration." When writers
lose objectivity they sometimes end up deliberately
deviating from the truth.
Few journalists would claim total neutrality or impartiality,
but they must strive toward detachment from their
own personal biases in their news work, and at The
Monument, we do.
Listen honestly- The third news gathering
practice to avoid bias is to listen honestly. The
reporter must write down as much of the meeting as
is possible, not selectively write only those statements
that appeal to him or her, or that he or she agrees
with. The Monument writes down as much of what was
said as we can, so that we have a substantive body
of events from which to choose to include in the article
and can represent it accurately. When reporters listen
openly, it leads to a more balanced news article.
Presenting the news
When
writing the article there are lots of ways that reporters
betray their biases.
Language- Use of a word with positive
or negative connotations rather than a more neutral
synonym can form in the audience's mind a biased picture.
Read and decide which is less biased: "Upham
complained that the Council was not addressing its
priorities" [from the Gray News on 11-18] or
"Upham said that the Council was not addressing
its priorities."
The word 'complain' should not be used unless the
newsmaker actually stated that he was complaining,
it is an accusatory word. Good reporters avoid using
those.
Weasel words- adjectives and words that
cast doubt or blame. Using 'appears to be' or 'seems
to' are ways that biased reporters denigrate the newsmaker
or citizen. It's bad reporting, too. News should be
clear, with definitive words. Here's an example from
an October issue of The Gray News: "The Gray
Town Council's thirst for information appears to be
insatiable." Well? Is it, or isn't it? Weasel
words are bias words designed to keep the paper just
this side of libel.
Quoting- A biased report will include
only segments or parts of quotes, rather than the
full sentence or even better, a proper context for
the quote. One signal that an article is biased is
to use what is called the journalistic sneer, or the
sarcastic quotation.
This involves putting quotes around a word or two
rather than the entire sentence. Here's an example
from the Gray News: "As the meeting wound down,
Upham said he wants to see how Pennell fits into the
Town's Capital Improvement Plan, and asked Town Manager
Mitch Berkowitz to provide him with information so
that Upham could get "up to speed" on it."
The quote should start from just after the word 'said.'
The smaller the part of the sentence quoted, the higher
the disregard for full quotation, hence, the sneer.
Language that includes weasel words, adjectives, judgment
words and improper quoting all indicate bias. Reliance
on the newsmakers to supply reporters with the news,
being part of the news or having too many associations
with government or organizations, and failing to listen
openly are indicators of bias.
Foundation of democracy
Wikipedia says that "one of the leading voices
in the U.S. on the subject of Journalistic Standards
and Ethics is the Society of Professional Journalists,"
of which The Monument are members. The Preamble to
its Code of Ethics states:
"...public enlightenment is the forerunner of
justice and the foundation of democracy. The duty
of the journalist is to further those ends by seeking
truth and providing a fair and comprehensive account
of events and issues. Conscientious journalists from
all media and specialties strive to serve the public
with thoroughness and honesty. Professional integrity
is the cornerstone of a journalist's credibility."
The Monument takes care to avoid bad practices. We're
not perfect, so if you ever read an article that shows
any of the bias indicators, let us know and we will
fix it. As always, thank you for reading.